Comments on: everyone, plz critique my story?

By: Righter

Righter — Sat, 28 Nov 2009 03:56:17 +0000

For more reviews you can try a writing site I’m on — chapteread.com — they have some pretty cool features.

Like a private writing area to save your writings. pen names, when you post your work you can choose who you want to read it [ friends only, fans only, or everyone.] when you receive feedback on your stories you can save the helpful ones and they’ll go into your private writing area. It’s helpful for when you go back to writing. good luck!

By: Always Ariana

Always Ariana — Sat, 28 Nov 2009 03:56:17 +0000

why would you post this…

By: Serial Shopper :)

Serial Shopper :) — Sat, 28 Nov 2009 03:56:17 +0000

…….

*no comment*

By: Mimosa

Mimosa — Sat, 28 Nov 2009 03:56:17 +0000

it isn’t too good… it’s descriptive, but not really. and try to put it into paragraphs for us to read. it’s dizzing.

By: Gurl1687

Gurl1687 — Sat, 28 Nov 2009 03:56:17 +0000

can you give us just the first page ?