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		<title>By: vano</title>
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		<description>Here are my suggestions:

Management of all aspects of design, development and promotion the websites.
- should be: Management of all aspects with regards to design, development and promotion via websites.

Medicine Administrating
- should be: Administering of medicine.

 Cash register operating
-should be: Operating of the cash register.

Offering friendly and helpful service to customers.
- should be: Providing good customer service when required.

Good knowlege of standard office software, including e-mail and internet
-should be: Proven skills in MS office.


Translation from English into Polish (excellent verbal and written communication skills).
Web design &amp; development using ecommerce software.
Product photography and picture editing skills.
Google tools user (Webmaster, Analytics, Adwords, Merchant Centre, Picasa).
- leave these out unless you require these skills in the job that you are applying for.

I am self-motivated and hard working person. Very keen and enthusiastic to learn new skills. I work well with other people as well as work in my own initiative. I always give one hundred percent of my skills, energy and experience in my job. 
I would change this to :

Am a self-motivated, hardworking, enthusiastic individual who enjoys learning new skils. I work well either in a team or as independent worker. In addition, I am truly committed to achieving the best standard for any job that needs to be completed.



Leave out this out of the CV: I give In my free time I love to spend time with my family. Watching my son grow and develop is the most rewarding experience in my life.

Hope this helps.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Here are my suggestions:</p>
<p>Management of all aspects of design, development and promotion the websites.<br />
- should be: Management of all aspects with regards to design, development and promotion via websites.</p>
<p>Medicine Administrating<br />
- should be: Administering of medicine.</p>
<p> Cash register operating<br />
-should be: Operating of the cash register.</p>
<p>Offering friendly and helpful service to customers.<br />
- should be: Providing good customer service when required.</p>
<p>Good knowlege of standard office software, including e-mail and internet<br />
-should be: Proven skills in MS office.</p>
<p>Translation from English into Polish (excellent verbal and written communication skills).<br />
Web design &amp; development using ecommerce software.<br />
Product photography and picture editing skills.<br />
Google tools user (Webmaster, Analytics, Adwords, Merchant Centre, Picasa).<br />
- leave these out unless you require these skills in the job that you are applying for.</p>
<p>I am self-motivated and hard working person. Very keen and enthusiastic to learn new skills. I work well with other people as well as work in my own initiative. I always give one hundred percent of my skills, energy and experience in my job.<br />
I would change this to :</p>
<p>Am a self-motivated, hardworking, enthusiastic individual who enjoys learning new skils. I work well either in a team or as independent worker. In addition, I am truly committed to achieving the best standard for any job that needs to be completed.</p>
<p>Leave out this out of the CV: I give In my free time I love to spend time with my family. Watching my son grow and develop is the most rewarding experience in my life.</p>
<p>Hope this helps.</p>
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